By Todd VanDerWerff

“A Disquiet Follows My Soul” is probably going to piss off a lot of Battlestar Galactica fans, especially coming this late in the show’s run. Many of the big plot developments occur offscreen and are only alluded to, the episode tries to shove us into the point-of-view of the members of the fleet instead of our heroes, and the whole thing is more of a grim mood piece about a species giving up without its leaders instead of the razzle-dazzle space opera we’re used to.
But while I don’t think this is an essential Battlestar or even one of its 10 or 20 best episodes ever, I do really admire the hell out of it without ever quite coming around to loving it. One of the things that makes Battlestar so good and also so occasionally maddening is that it rarely gives the audience exactly what they want, only giving it to us after a long period of dragging us through a bramble patch of what it thinks we need. This can lead to some enervating television (much of the back half of season three), but it also makes for some truly terrific television, such as this season’s “Faith,” which was nothing less than a long dissertation on the afterlife with a sci-fi action plot shunted off to the side. It was good television precisely BECAUSE it didn’t do what we wanted but, rather, what the BSG crew was interested in pursuing. Battlestar, like all good television series, is an uneasy mix of artistry and commercial appeal, but it’s also about as personal a statement as you’re likely to find on television, thanks to everything series developer Ron Moore and his cast and crew seem to believe about human nature.
“Disquiet” was a more direct personal statement than usual from Moore, since it’s the first episode he’s written and directed (after a decades-long career in entertainment, this is Moore’s very first directorial credit). Of all of the Battlestar writers, Moore is usually the most interested in seeing just how much can be left out of the story and still let the audience catch up, and he leaves a surprising amount out of “Disquiet,” instead being more interested in moody little character scenes that show us just where the fleet is emotionally now that Earth has been discovered to be in utter ruin. For example, we find out that Tigh (Michael Hogan) has told a few people that his dead wife was the final Cylon model, but we only find it out when Lee (Jamie Bamber) lets slip with a “she” in a press conference, rather than directly seeing Tigh tell anyone. As exciting as this kind of storytelling can be, Moore probably should have let us see Tyrol (Aaron Douglas) begin to side with his Cylon brethren over the humans (even if both groups are allied). It’s the kind of scene that would be interesting to see and might shed new light on a character who plays things pretty close to the vest, and just having Tyrol talk about what the Cylons want (with more pronoun confusion) feels like a bit of a missed opportunity. Now just watch every episode from now on feature long scenes of Tyrol chilling with the other Cylons.
In his past scripts for the series, Moore has always been very fascinated with physical processes. In my very first Battlestar review for House Next Door (of the third season premiere), I talked at length about how that episode used close-ups of people just existing in a moment and DOING things to create a singular mood (of oppression) that drove the rest of the episode. Moore really returns to that notion here, opening with a long montage of Adama (Edward James Olmos) getting ready for his day, brushing his teeth and so on, then walking through his ship, picking up litter and trying to restore order to a world that’s slowly spinning into chaos. He goes from there into a shot of Tigh and Six’s (Tricia Helfer) baby’s sonogram that seems to last forever (I actually thought my DVR had frozen), nicely encapsulating the huge weight parents feel at seeing how abruptly their worlds shift when they see their child for the first time but also recentering the series’ mythology, in a way, on this spawn of Cylon and Cylon (which has the potential to completely rewrite the series’ cosmology).
Moore centers nearly every scene around these physical processes. We first see how freaked out and frustrated Starbuck (Katee Sackhoff) is when we watch her struggle to choke down her algae salad. We get long, hazy shots of Roslin’s (Mary McDonnell) feet pounding through the hallways of the Galactica as she lets go of responsibility and tries to embrace what’s left of her rapidly ending life (these shots seemed to be very subtly slowed down – not blatant slow motion, but just a few frames per second more to give a dreamlike sensation). When we see Baltar (James Callis, sadly underused in these last two episodes) for the only time in this episode, it’s to watch him give a sermon where he angrily turns on the God he was preaching about just a few episodes ago, but even this scene is shot somewhat unconventionally, focusing at length on the recording process for the sermon, from the microphone Baltar uses to the reel-to-reel tapes he’s recording on to the audience taking in his words. The whole episode is filled with these little moments that suggest this is part of Moore’s modus operandi. We are what we do, he seems to be suggesting, not what we say we are. Adama is a man who suggests that he is a good leader, the kind of man people should be listening to, but he’s also a man who brushes his teeth, who picks up litter. And, indeed, that’s part of WHY he’s a good leader – BECAUSE he makes sure his ship is clean and worthy of his command. Similarly, Starbuck is a very good pilot, but every time we see her in this episode, she seems one frazzled nerve away from another complete breakdown. Roslin has been trying very hard to hold back her humanity in many ways as the series has gone on, but now all she wants is to let all of that humanity out. She wants to run, she wants to feel pain, and she wants to make love to Adama (as she does in the lovely closing scene of the episode, which is shot perhaps a bit too literally – Adama and Roslin are framed almost too explicitly as a circle of light in the darkness – but is a nicely composed moment nonetheless).
My favorite thing about this episode was how ably it put us in the mindset of everyone in the fleet who’s not one of our heroes without really leaving our heroes, using, instead, Zarek (Richard Hatch) and Gaeta (Alessandro Juliani) as surrogates for the rest of the fleet. It seems obvious, in retrospect, that everyone else would be skeptical of the uneasy alliance Lee forged with the Cylons at the end of “Revelations,” but most shows would skip right past this and assume that the leaders of the fleet eased everyone’s concerns. On Battlestar, because Roslin has largely abandoned her post (in favor of the aforementioned living-life-while-she-still-has-it plan) and because, let’s not forget, the Cylons killed billions and billions of people to start off the series. There’s really no way most of the fleet would just suddenly be OK with them without serious prompting from leaders like Roslin and Adama. In the absence of Roslin, though, Zarek is fomenting suspicion (and he seems to be planning a mutiny with Gaeta, who is apparently the latest character-I’ve-never-liked who the series is trying to reclaim), and Adama’s seemingly singlehanded decisions to install Cylon technology aboard human ships and more firmly cement the alliance with the Cylons are just creating even more talking points FOR that suspicion. (I should probably note that this is not a general human-Cylon alliance; apparently, Brother Cavil (Dean Stockwell) and the shreds of the old Cylon society are still prowling the cosmos, and when they show up, things look to go from bad to worse.)
If I was really fond of this episode, there was one plot development that kept me from wholly embracing it. Moore is insistent in this interview with Maureen Ryan that the revelation that Tyrol’s son from his marriage to my beloved Cally (Nicki Clyne) was actually not his doesn’t mean that Cally cheated on him, but it still seems like even more heaping on of perils for Cally, who always seemed to be forced to go through some awful stuff throughout the run of the series and now has to have her name besmirched even in death. For shame! That said, while it makes sense that Moore and his writers would want Hera to be the only human-Cylon hybrid, just tossing out that Hot Dog is ACTUALLY the father of Tyrol’s son feels a little abrupt. It’s a little too much of a writer’s solution to a conundrum that’s not possible to solve very elegantly, even if it did lead to a well-shot fistfight between Tyrol and Hot Dog. There was potential to draw parallels here between Tigh’s impending fatherhood and Tyrol feeling his own sense of fatherhood slipping away, but they were never terribly worked out outside of the scene in the medical ward where Cottle (Donnelly Rhodes) shows Tigh and Six the sonogram and then later has to treat Tyrol’s son. From there, things just sort of fall into a scene where Tyrol tells Hot Dog what it’s like to be a dad, and while it’s a nice little scene, it’s hard to not fight off the impulse that that’s it.
Again, I suspect many of you will have found this episode irksome, but I’d ask you to rewatch and reconsider. There’s plenty here to love, including a lot of stuff I haven’t touched on, like the way Sackhoff plays the scene where Gaeta tries to rub salt in Starbuck’s wounds (“Rimshot!” is a new comic highlight of the series) or how ably Moore gets the extras to suggest the utter chaos that the Adamas of the fleet are just barely able to hold back. I suspect this was ultimately a “setting things in motion” episode, where we got to see the beginnings of many plots that will carry through to the end of the season and series, but it was an elegantly constructed one all around and a fine directorial debut for Moore.
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House contributor Todd VanDerWerff is the publisher of the pop culture blog South Dakota Dark.
BSG Saturdays: Season 4, Ep. 12, "A Disquiet Follows My Soul"
Saturday, January 24, 2009
BSG Saturdays: Season 4, Ep. 12, "A Disquiet Follows My Soul"
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The most important question plaguing me right now--and I'm not sure if this is a good thing or a bad thing--is if Hot Dog got his rash from Cally or if he gave it to her and that's one of the reasons why she was so on edge all the time.
This season's the first time I've watched the show as it airs, and I finally understand some of the frustrations people have had with it for the past two seasons. It's so much more cohesive on DVD, where decent but not earth-shattering episodes like this blend better into the whole.
I thought there were some problems with the writing. A couple trite lines, particularly Roslin's bit about living for today because tomorrow might never come, which is however earned and dramatically sound perhaps something best left unsaid, and the encounter between Gaeta and Starbuck--despite having a couple good insults (but what exactly is a half-kick?)--didn't really click. The writing on Battlestar, though it's pretty much consistently better than network TV, is sometimes riding a thin line between excellent and cliche. I love the first season, but there were many moments in it when I could predict, to the word, the next line.
I legitimately loved the opening, ending, and Baltar's scene. For some reason at the beginning of the latter Callis's line readings sounded like John Lennon mumbling into a tape recorder (and imagining there's no heaven).
And the only way Raptor Planet could get any more awesome is if the full title was Raptor Planet: A Planet of Raptors and it played on a double bill with Death Bed: The Bed That Eats People.
Our cable operator added SciFi HD at the end of the year, so it definitely exists. And BSG looks great it in.
Nice write-up as always, BTW.
Something that struck me as I watched the episode again today is how the show's started commenting on and criticizing itself in some funny and interesting ways: Tigh's line about whether or not Tyrol needs a chart to keep everything straight; Zarek's line about not being sure what Lee's job is on any given day. Those could just be acknowledgments of the complaints of some of the fans, but more significantly, there's the way the show and the characters deal with the Tilium ship subplot. It's something that would have been the locus of a bombastic, action-packed episode in season one or two that here is treated completely anticlimactically. We don't even get to see Zarek being arrested. I missed the dialogue in the final scene the first time, maybe because I was too busy processing that Bill and Laura had finally frakked, but it's perfect. Neither of them care. To paraphrase Thomas Pynchon: "They are in love. Frak the fleet."
"I hate this job." Great line from Adama. Can't believe it's taken him this long to say it because I've often thought he has the most thankless, hapless job in the entire fleet.
Last things first: On the other hand, why doesn’t Sci-Fi have an HD service? Or, more to the point, if they do, why doesn’t Charter carry it?
There is a SciFi HD channel and the people running Charter are complete and total morons.
So, now that we have that settled, let's move on to Cattlecar Galactica.
The only good scenes in this episode were Adama and Roslin.
Everything else was crap.
That's it - see you next week.
Moore is insistent in this interview with Maureen Ryan that the revelation that Tyrol’s son from his marriage to my beloved Cally (Nicki Clyne) was actually not his doesn’t mean that Cally cheated on him, but it still seems like even more heaping on of perils for Cally, who always seemed to be forced to go through some awful stuff throughout the run of the series and now has to have her name besmirched even in death. For shame!
Wait a fraking minute there -- her name besmirched?
Because there's the possibility that however fraked up Cally was, she was rational enough to think disclosing Lil' Nicky's paternity to a man who already smacked the shit out her once wasn't entirely wise?
That she might just have had a one night stand, without contraception, with Hot Dog -- the nugget who once memorably grossed out Helo by over-sharing about his itchy cha-cha -- that she'd rather forget about? Because that's never happened on this show before.
And just because Cally isn't a virginal madonna, that doesn't make her a whore either.
No HD? That's odd. I have Charter in St. Louis and SciFi HD was added about two weeks ago, just in time.
Craig: Not that she wasn't smart about how she handled it, but having a kid with the guy you're not married to is not generally a good sign. Though the timeline Moore lays out in that interview is certainly plausible, it relies too heavily on the fact that EVERYONE in the BSG-verse seems to get married at the drop of the hat. I know there's not a lot to DO there, but courtship seems to be out the window.
Not that she wasn't smart about how she handled it, but having a kid with the guy you're not married to is not generally a good sign.
As a general principle, I'd say being married to a man who beat you so severely during a psychotic episode you had to have your jaw wired is specifically a very bad sign indeed.
I know there's not a lot to DO there, but courtship seems to be out the window.
Oh, Gods, don't people bitch enough about BSG being more soap opera than space opera? :) Perhaps I buy the whole Cally's BabyPapa thing fairly easily, because for me it's a neat fit with the whole creepy orgy of bad faith, dishonesty and general weirdness those two have been for me from the beginning.
Not a perfect episode, but, as usual, quite enjoyable. I'm past trying to predict what will happen and now just sitting back to enjoy the ride.
A few observations:
Loved Tigh's reaction to Tyrol's "pronoun confusion."
There are 10 BSG "Webisodes" (5 mins each) found on scifi.com's BSG area (or OnDemand), that establish more of the backstory explaining why Gaeta is so adamate in his opposition to the alliance with the Cylons. The webisodes also present Gaeta's homosexual relationship with a fellow crew member in a matter-of-factly handled manner. I'm not sure if that relationship will be revisited in the broadcast episodes.
One small nit: I found Adama's shower a bit too luxurious waste of water given their existence in such a closed system. I realize that a universe with FTL ships, probably has advanced water reclamation technology too. But, BSG had established in previous seasons how precious that commodity is.
Finally, I'm not sure if the shots of Adama picking up trash off the floor throughout the episode leading up to his getting the coordinates for the fuel ship in a similar manner was inspired or a tad contrived (my gut reaction was the latter).
According to Ron Moore, the lovely poem that Adama reads at the beginning is by Emily Dickinson. I take it's from that same multidimensional creative ether that gave us Anders's Watchtower.
Let me second the recommendation that you seek out the recent BSG "Face of the Enemy" webisodes on SciFi or Youtube. Ten parts at 4-5 minutes each makes it pretty much a new episode all by itself, and it goes a long way towards explaining Gaeta's new found hatred of Cylons.
Poor boy got mind frakked by the Cylons on New Caprica worse than Starbuck.
What is it about this show that I cannot become a deep fan of? It almost seemed as if it takes itself too seriously at times. Or that its grittiness and "profound statements" about life is a little too over-the-top for my tastes. I think that Ron Moore simply tries to hard.
Cool, you do BSG write-ups too!
Another observation: something's going on with Adama's health, at least as indicated with him twice -- once in the long Adama's morning sequence, & again just before confronting Roslin on her new running habit -- taking a pill. He also brushed his teeth both times, not sure if this means the pill gives a bad taste in the mouth. Second time he paused mid-process & was visibly sweating & in pain.
Re: "Raptor Planet" -- good title or not, whenever I see SciFi Channel advertise a SciFi Original Movie, my immediate reaction is, I bet it sucks. In the few times I've tried watching one, they have invariably been horrific. Have they ever made a decent SciFi Original Movie? -- & yet they do great with BSG, did pretty well with "The Lost Room" & "The Tin Man" miniseries.
I couldn't stomach more than about an hour of their remake of "The Andromeda Strain" -- the original made in the late 1970s was far better (as was Michael Crichton's novel). Their adaptations of Frank Herbert's "Children of Dune," Ursula K. LeGuin's Earthsea trilogy, & Philip Jose Farmer's "Riverworld" -- read the books, they're far better. I once wrote a blog post entitled "Sci-Fi Channel is to Earthsea as Bush is to the U.S.", & it was my experience with their Earthsea adaptation that made me initially reluctant to give BSG a try.
Another comment, about the larger mythography of BSG --
Pretty obviously there's still some large power at work that no one is quite sure of. At the end of Season 3 the final four were all pretty bewildered to hear that they supposedly knew the way to Earth -- they've got a clue now about it now with their flashbacks in the last episode, but still plenty of holes to fill in. Baltar is perhaps not so confident now of the One God he's been preaching. And meantime -- we still have no final explanation of Baltar's Head 6 or Head Baltar, or of the accuracy of Head 6's guidance of him, we still have no final explanation of how Starbuck was cloned or more importantly who cloned her and her dog tags and her wedding ring and her Viper. We still don't know why Hera is so important, or the shared dream of the Opera House. Or who it was who originally prohibited the original seven Cylon models from thinking/talking about the Final Five.
The Cylon's/Baltar's One God?
I've gotta say, I've never found Baltar's preachings about the nonexistence of the Colonial's gods to be a very convincing argument in favor of a One God, I must say. If theodicy (the justice of god) makes no sense with multiple gods, it makes no sense really with one god either. My own answer to that has been -- well, maybe theodicy isn't actually what god(s) is about. I'll be interested to see BSG's final answers, if any, on this question. In the meantime, I find BSG examination of religion to be one of the most interesting features of the show, & that's saying a lot since I find so much of this show interesting.
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